Slow writing challenge

Nervously,I stumbled across the path,the crackling twigs were braking like somebody was following me! Was I dreaming or was I in heaven?I was scared out of my terrifying wits….Suddenly,I saw a figer it seemed it looked like it was coming closer.I saw it wearing a black coat.I couldn’t get a closer look of it.Finally,I got to the end of the path and got safely home!

slow writing

Silently,I crept through the deep,dark woods.I started to run as fast as Usain Bolt because I stepped on a twig tat made me jump.”Will I ever get out of here?”because I’m in hell.Then a group started to surround me.Right there on the spot they started t attack me!Later that day,my mum called me but there was no reply…