Once upon a time there was a girl called Michelle.She was a very bright girl and she could not wait for the summer holidays.
Michelle all ways wanted to fly on a plane she thought about flying by her self but it was two expensive to fly on the plane. Michelle really wanted to see the famous polar bear near the snowy mountains.
Meanwhile, Michelle’s mum said that we should go black pool.Michelle just said ok because she had no chose to go or not.
When the Michelle arrived at black pool.IT WAS THE BEST SUMMER HOLIDAY EVER! Even though she didn’t go on a plane or see the polar bears!!
This week we have been learning to write good setting descriptions. The children had to then use these skills in their own writing. Here is 3 examples of their work:
Lauren E and Michelle
After lunch, we set off to the boring museum. Our rusty car chugging along the long bumpy road. When we arrived, I stared at the silver metal gates which lead to the museum. I dragged myself slowly towards them, wishing the museum never existed!
As she arrived, the sky began to darken and it began to drizzle with rain. They hurried into the shelter of the museum. Inside it was posh and there were beautiful, glittering chandeliers. It looked brand new.
“Let’s go and explore” said Becky gazing all around her.
They came to the first wooden door, it creaked open. You could tell it was really old.
Seeing the hieroglyphics above the old rotten, wooden door I strode confidently through the doors. Straight ahead of me was a magnificent golden Egyptian head, shining out like the sun. Curiously glancing at the information, I found out he was King Peppy.
As the sun covered the trees,I decided to ride my bike.On the way I saw a creaky gate leading to a graveyard. As I walked in the in the grave yard, the crows started yelling like dogs.I looked at the old dusty grave stones, wondering if any anseters were there. I looked on the floor, there was a dead bird . Quickly I headed to the church .As I heard a fluttering sound, the gate open slowly heavy footsteps came closer and closer and closer………..
Today was the worst day of my life, worst than when my best friend Katie hit me with a volleyball and cut my head! I got my school bag ready to go to school in Mumbai.I did not want to go to my new school in Mumbai.When I arrived at Mumbai ,there was so many people,street sellers, rickshaws, tuck tucks and it was so nosey . beep beeping nosies from a car. When me and dad were walking to the school gate I It was scary. Dad walk away I was alone!
I am writing this letter because I miss you and I love you . I want you come back. Were are you Dad? It has been two years sine you had sent anything to me. I cant go school I have to go work and I am only 12!
All I want is you to come back ,my sister is sick we have the same food every day. Where are you?
When you did not send me any more letters for two years I thought you did not like me I thought you will never come back to live………
from Anand xxxxxxx