Descriptive Writing

This week we have been learning to write good setting descriptions. The children had to then use these skills in their own writing. Here is 3 examples of their work:

Lauren E and Michelle

After lunch, we set off to the boring museum. Our rusty car chugging along the long bumpy road. When we arrived, I stared at the silver metal gates which lead to the museum. I dragged myself slowly towards them, wishing the museum never existed!

Eve

As she arrived, the sky began to darken and it began to drizzle with rain. They hurried into the shelter of the museum. Inside it was posh and there were beautiful, glittering chandeliers. It looked brand new.

“Let’s go and explore” said Becky gazing all around her.

They came to the first wooden door, it creaked open. You could tell it was really old.

Alan

Seeing the hieroglyphics above the old rotten, wooden door I strode confidently through the doors. Straight ahead of me was a magnificent golden Egyptian head, shining out like the sun. Curiously glancing at the information, I found out he was King Peppy.

The Grave Yard

As the sun covered the trees,I decided to ride my bike.On the way I saw a creaky gate leading to a graveyard. As I walked in the in the grave yard, the crows started yelling like dogs.I looked at the old dusty grave stones, wondering if any anseters were there.  I looked on the floor, there was a dead bird . Quickly I headed  to the church .As I heard a fluttering  sound, the gate open slowly heavy footsteps  came closer and closer and closer………..

The Croods

Me and my brother,and daddy all went to watch the Croods .It was about a cave man family not knowing that the world is going to end until a boy helps them to find a better place.The family didn’t get a lot of food because they were being hunted by a brown Lion. I like the film because it was funny and it was one of the best films I have ever watched.I give this film 5-5.

God Our Saviour By Samuel and Lauren E

God Our Savior

You help the rivers flow,

You help the crops grow,

you help the wind blow,

You help us all go.

God God is like the sun shining in the sky,

God God is like the miracles shining high.

You help us when we need you,

You are always there for me,

You keep the sky blue,

Whenever I think of you.

God God is like the sun shining in the sky,

God God is like the miracles shining high.

You help us when we are scared,

You help us when we fall,

You make sure we don’t be mean,

and you treat us all well.

God God is like the sun shining in the sky,

God God is like the miracles shining high.


By Samuel,And LaurenE