Once upon a time there lived a young boy called Jack,he lived in a dirty,ruined, ram shackled,house in the forest.He cleans up after his two horrible,disgusting,ginger cats and his bald,evil dad.Despite having a horrible life at least he had some where to live.Jack had blue eyes and brown hair and was as strong as a ox.

One night Jack was left alone in the messed up house cleaning all sorts like cans,meat and dirty cat food.His evil dad and his two ugly cats went to a disco,he was so tempted to go but he couldn’t.Then he saw a bang of light and wondered what it was,he thought is there some one in the house.What could it be?

Just then,Jack went into the bed room and it was a bee with a silver wand.At that moment the bee started saying go to the disco Jack thought have I lost my mind.Suddenly the bee wafted the wand and bang Jack had a smart suit,a carriage that was red bye a horse and men were the horses.Smiling the fairy god bee said                                                               “go to that disco now oh! don’t forget it’s just outside the forest”.                                           “Okay!”said Jack merrily and there he went but what is his dad going to think…

Once he got to the disco his dad was already leaving even though he is a party animal.When Jack went in and started dancing right next to a rich city woman.Whilst Jack was losing time he noticed it was twelve o’clock so he zoomed out but he lost his top zooming out of the disco.Suddenly he ran in the house and sneaked up stairs to his bed room but his dad didn’t know he went to the disco.The next day the rich city woman Alice came around the deep,dark woods from her beautiful castle.

At that moment when Jack was sweeping he heard a knock on the door                                       “wonder who that will be”said Jack looking suspicious.When he opened the door it was Alice looking for some one to fit in the top,suddenly Jacks dad butted in and said                 “it will not fit on that small rag”but it did fit Jack and Alice purposed at once.Jack felt if I get married to a rich city woman who lives in a castle,I would be rich he felt so amazing he could explode.

In the end Jack and Alice live together.5 years on in the castle they have a fight and Jack runs away with millions,thousands what will he do with it.He could go sky diving or snow boarding who will he strike next…

2 thoughts on “Princerella

  1. Leon… Great story! Me and my son Harry (5) thought that Jack sounded like a lot of fun, but that in the end he was a bit mean for leaving poor Alice!! I hope he had fun Snowboarding!!

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